Write a /letter to your landlord about the problem with a water leak in your house. Please say
– What is the problem?
– What is the source of the problem, in your opinion?
– What do you think needs to be done?
Hello Sergey,
I am writing in regards with water leak issue in the en suite bathroom of the apartment which you rent us.
The mentioned problem has been taking place since yesterday when my wife flushed water from a toilet. Unfortunately, flushing button has stuck in its bottom position and it does not want to return back which causes the permanent water leak from toilet's tank into drainage. Afterwards we made several attempts to fix the problem, but without any luck. Currently we left the toiled with closed inlet and cannot use it which causes a lot of discomfort for us.
In my opinion, as far as I do not have necessary tools to perform a repair job, the problem requires an attention of a professional plumber in order to replace or repair flushing mechanism. Probably, you are able to cope with this issue without engaging anyone else. Please, let us know which option to go.
Sincerely yours,
Max.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Sergey, I am writing in regards with water leak ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oom of the apartment which you rent us. The mentioned problem has been taking pl...
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Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...bottom position and it does not want to return back which causes the permanent water leak ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o return back which causes the permanent water leak from toilets tank into draina...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... option to go. Sincerely yours, Max.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87421383648 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49667315527 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716981132075 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.087059126 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1111111111 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143555831161 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507634635842 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371705781018 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992078188127 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00757146266653 0.0580467560999 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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