Dear John,
I just saw an email seeking nominations for the best employee of the year award. I would like to nominate Imran from our team as a candidate for this Award.
From quite a long time, I was wondering that their should be some reward for Imran as he has helped our company in saving $20,000 within a shot span of time. According to our past reports, this is the biggest savings we have even done since commencement and same was also appreciated by our onshore client, Paul. Apart from this, Imran is a great motivator for the entire team and is a one spot resolution for all of us. Even, I had learnt various professional traits from him with the help of which my performance has also improved.
I would also like to share with you that, Paul has helped various new joiners with growth path sessions. He is a person who has a great sense of convincing power and one who know's, how to lead by example. As per me, beyond a shadow of doubt he has all the characteristics of an efficient employee and he truly deserves the award.
I look forward to an update from you regarding the same.
Thank you
Raj (Team AOS )
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41626794258 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43065026544 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612440191388 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2365678261 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9090909091 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192488620183 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751875051475 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596157787622 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12103267484 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858922546369 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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