Dear Sir,
I am your Assistant manager Rick and writing this letter to recommend one of my Junior
for best employee award of this year. First of all, I thank you for introducing the award system to our work culture as it inspires and bring cheer in fellow workers. The person who fits the description and eligible for this honour is Richard who joined as a trainee and currently posted as Finance executive in our company.
Richard joined our association as intern and grown to executive level with in 2 years by his best efforts and sincerity. I am really proud of his talents and as his reporting officer I can assure his skills are asset to our team. His sales report alone is enough to speak about his extraordinary salesmanship where he achieved his target by first quarter of this year and 20% more than any other member.
In my view, a good employee is a person who not only reach his goals but also show his crisis managing ability and maintaining work serenity. Daring presentation and bold execution of work are innate qualities. I hope after going through his work record you will also agree with my opinion. I also thank you for giving me this opportunity of being in your selection team of nominating best employee award.
Yours faithfully,
Rick.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 375, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'nominating the best'.
Suggestion: nominating the best
...nity of being in your selection team of nominating best employee award. Yours faithfully, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, really, so, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72197309417 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53570691679 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618834080717 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4934440158 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7272727273 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29053333359 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112474314034 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115945697047 0.0603063233224 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183441210924 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888264597957 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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