Write a letter to your manager to tell him/her about some company documents that you lost while travelling with them, please say
What were the documents?
Where and when did you travel with them?
Suggest a solution for this situation.
Dear Ms. Mariam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I was taking the offer letter and deputation contract of Mr. Salik to Dubai. However, the documents were lost during my travel.
This unfortunate incident took place when I put my hand carry bag in luggage on insistence of boarding officer at Karachi airport yesterday evening. Although, the documents were kept safely in my hand carry, however, it didn't turned out to be that safe. I have also lost that bag and the airlines in which I traveled is looking into the matter.
In order to correct this mishap, I can issue Mr. Salik's offer letter as well as his deputation contract letter from Dubai office as I always keep some letter heads with me for emergency letter issuance. Please advise on this solution as this will cover our situation pretty well at the moment.
Anticipating your response at your earliest.
Yours Sincerely,
Fahad Arif
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...pt safely in my hand carry, however, it didnt turned out to be that safe. I have also...
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Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...liest. Yours Sincerely, Fahad Arif
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91719745223 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44466531338 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68152866242 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7673673943 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253225864854 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934720952068 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538548491781 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138297207916 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672052902762 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.