WRITING TASK 1 – General Writing IELTSYou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter•give contact details for when you are aw

Dear James,

I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to say thank you for agreeing to take care of my dog Rocky and my house as it would have been very difficult for me to leave them alone. Also, I want to tell you that I am leaving tomorrow at 7.00PM and will com back on 14th October.

Now, there are few important things that I want you to keep in mind. Firstly, Rocky is very active and needs to go out for a walk at least twice a day to get fresh. Secondly, he only eats non-veg food and some milk three times a day. I have kept everything ready in freeze, you just have to heat it in microwave and feed him.

Moreover, my maid will come everyday in morning to take keys from you for cleaning my house. Just make sure that she returns you the keys on her way back. Also, ask her if she has turned off all the lights, taps and the gas knobs because she sometimes by mistake leaves them on.

Lastly, thank you once again for favouring me. I am indeed, highly obliged to you.

See you soon,
John

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ed him. Moreover, my maid will come everyday in morning to take keys from you for cl...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11386138614 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.9511294641 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678217821782 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.235522574 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9230769231 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153379682499 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055843936911 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404250824917 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915878899202 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504093031933 0.0580467560999 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.18 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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