Writing task 1 a letter Write a letter to a friend telling him her that you re going back to your home town and you want to give him her some furniture Please say why you thought about him her describe the furniture suggest a way for him her

Dear Priya,
Hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am moving to my hometown next month. So, I don't want to move there with my all furniture and that's why I want to give you some furniture before I leave.

As you know, my studies are completed and I got a job in my hometown so I decided to stay there with my family. so, I can spend some time with them and take care of them. The cost of moving furniture is very high. Thus, instead of doing the same it's better to leave the furniture here. When you had visited my house last month you have seen my dining table and some living room furniture like couch and TV cabinet and you liked it a lot so I decided to give it to you. I am leaving for my hometown in next month so it would be great if you can visit my home next weekend with one truck, we can enjoy the lunch together and then you can load the furniture in the truck with the help of some movers and drive back the same to your home.

Please write back to me with your thoughts for the same.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Kind Regards,
Divya

Votes
Average: 6.7 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am moving to my hometown next month. So, I dont want to move there with my all fu...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...oving to my hometown next month. So, I dont want to move there with my all furnitur...
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Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...to move there with my all furniture and thats why I want to give you some furniture b...
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...I decided to stay there with my family. so, I can spend some time with them and ta...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, thus, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0502283105 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.91202650985 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0895549993 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9166666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209333936121 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837576409357 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596654514095 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15360320998 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452288144409 0.0580467560999 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.21 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.54 7.59969072165 73% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 41.2886597938 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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