Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you woefully that some of the company's documents have strayed from me which are essential for the project, currently we are working on. They had all the valuable information required to pursue the project further.
Allow me to describe the situation, in which those documents were lost. As you know, last week, I went Delhi to attend a meeting. While traveling in train, I had kept the suitcase on my seat 13-2 in coach number S-6. But lamentably during deboarding the train, it slipped from my mind to collect the bag containing all those documents.
As, we are intensively in need of those papers, I request you to contact the highest railway authority you know to search it. Since, even after writing a slew of letters to them, up till now I have not received any reply from their end. All the necessary details about my journey have been mailed to you to follow this matter somberly.
My sincere apology for the inconvenience caused to you.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... am writing to inform you woefully that some of the companys documents have strayed from me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79545454545 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53709565031 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5921672351 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7272727273 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228417189333 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725904867141 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045566644171 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120160843683 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263224569882 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.