Although, we feel blessed that we are living in this modern world, where the evolution of technology is at its peak. Conversely, I must say assertively that it has many drawbacks as well which are in fact, perilous for the growth of the society. One such major con is the tremendous rise in the stress level of human beings.
To embark upon, there are a slew reasons that lead to anxiety nowadays, but the most common among youth is the incessant increase in competition. People in today's world are striving to get descent jobs and handsome salary, inspite of being highly qualified. Even students are facing challenges to get admission in reputed colleges unless they score extremely good marks.
Furthermore, people are working unceasingly to fulfill the needs and aspirations of their family. This not only affect their health adversely but indeed deprive them from spending some quality time with their loved ones. Hence, this kind of life style gives birth to a nerve wracking milieu. Also, elderly people are mostly depressed in such an environment because they are lonely and woeful. This is due to their children, who do not have enough time to look after them properly.
To sum up, though there are various factors responsible for this lamentable situation but we must try to find a way to deal with this inextricable matter. Therefore, one must make schedule in such a way that there is always some spare time to relax oneself. Additionally, we can also plan to out on a vacation with family at least once in six months as it will be helpful in rejuvenation. Moreover, we should encourage our children to do their best rather than pressurizing them to get high rank. I firmly believe, all these suggestions will resolve this problem inevitably.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_DECENT_DESCENT[2]
Message: Did you mean 'decent'?
Suggestion: decent
...ple in todays world are striving to get descent jobs and handsome salary, inspite of be...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
...ed. Even students are facing challenges to get admission in reputed colleges unless th...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, at least, in fact, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89966555184 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62232525582 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665551839465 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2082959306 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173227872331 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459381720836 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434022958765 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942751323096 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660765497201 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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