Writing task 1 (a letter)
Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged a delivery of goods and say
– Inform him/her what items you have purchased that were supposed to be delivered.
– What issues did you face with the delivery service?
– Suggest what can be done about the matter.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you about the issues I am facing with the delivery of goods, which is purchased using your website. The order id is #1234, I bought a pair of aviator sunglasses, a red cap, and a radio watch as a package, on 14 February.
I choose express delivery option at the time of purchasing, by which the products should be delivered to me within two days after placing the order. However, my package is still not arrived, I tried to contact the courier company but did not get a proper response from them. Futhermore, I have difficulties in tracing my package because the logistics company's website is constantly crashing.
I will be very grateful if you could assist me in tracking my order, and deliver it swiftly as promised at the time of buying, as I purchased the goods as a gift for my son's birthday which is next week.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Peralta.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to express'
Suggestion: to express
... a package, on 14 February. I choose express delivery option at the time of purchasi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62275449102 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6352476357 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682634730539 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9939560233 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200938575758 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074478605748 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808968248146 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117960283195 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500088381388 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.