Writing task 1 (a letter)
Write a letter to a company manager with whom you arranged a delivery of goods and say
– Inform him/her what items you have purchased that were supposed to be delivered.
– What issues did you face with the delivery service?
– Suggest what can be done about the matter.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you with regards to the dissatisfaction with your delivery services. I recently bought a dinning table and few decoration items for my house from your showroom.
Let me explain my situation. The Store Incharge promised me to deliver these items by the end of this week, however it got delayed by four days which is highly non professional and unacceptable. Another problem was about the packaging of the decoration items. When I opened the packing it was broke down as the same was very fragile.
I would like to suggest you that kindly send your experienced employee to visit my house to check the condition of these items, make a note of it and then submit the same for your review. Afterthat, I want the replacement of all the items which are broken and also the compensation for the time and discomfort which I faced with your delivery services.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sohil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you w...
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Line 11, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y house from your showroom. Let me explain my situation. The St...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s the same was very fragile. I would like to suggest you that kindly ...
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Line 19, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur delivery services. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sohil
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Line 23, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...from you. Yours faithfully, Sohil
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Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p; Yours faithfully, Sohil
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43529411765 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46732149347 2.54303337028 136% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3687480819 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 76.5299724578 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141420445933 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747708258894 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988998978666 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083352054512 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889382701036 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 8.37731958763 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 8.71597938144 167% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.