You would like a temporary job working in a summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer.
Write a letter to the organizers of the summer camp.
In your letter:
Explain what sort of job you would like to do
Describe your personality
Say what experience and skills you have
You should write at least 150 words
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for a job in an administration department for a summer camp which is happening after one month.
I am an Omani national studied at University of London in United Kingdom. Even though I have a degree of Financial Accountant, I am very keen in working as Administrative Officer. This is an interesting field to work according to my personal experience. By nature, I am completely a friendly person with positive attitude and a team player.
Let me explain my situation. I have been working with Nelson Primary School from last five years as a Head of Administrative Department. In these years,I have gained excellent grip of computer knowledge, various data entry softwares, internet applications and of course accounting packages. I am on my annual vacation and therefore I want to utilize my time working with adolescents. It gives me immense pleasure working with teenagers and young children.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sohil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...res, internet applications and of course accounting packages. I am on my annual v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27710843373 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15532139855 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692771084337 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1818781708 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135076877233 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435072232124 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578848332568 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936888854517 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854004912619 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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