Writing task 1 (a letter)
You are a club secretary. An expert from a different country recently gave a talk at the club. Write a letter to thank him/her and say how club members enjoyed it. Include the following in your letter:
– When and where did the talk take place?
– Explain why the members enjoyed it.
– Suggest another lecture to be done in the future.
Hello Mr. Peter,
Greetings for the day.!!
Hope you had a safe and comfortable journey while returning to your home. I am writing this letter to express my gratitude towards the time you have devoted for our Karnavati club last week and gave a wonderful lecture on stress relief.
Our club is offering various types of activities for our members like indoor and outdoor sports, fitness centre, organising events and speech on trending topics which help our members to enjoy the life from hectic schedule and learn some new thing which they can learn and implement in their life. Last week our members got a chance to heard something from you on Stress relief, they loved how you have explained the how to get relief from stress by doing multiple things like joining laughing club, yoga, spending time with family etc. The most important thing they liked about your lecture is you have explained how to make balance between personal and professional life to stay away from stress. After discussing about your lectures with our members they suggested me to arrange an another lecture of your in near future so they will be motivated and live happy life.
Please get back to me with your preferred date and time for next lecture. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Divya
(Secretary, Karnavati Club)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Mr. Peter, Greetings for the day.!! Hope you had...
^^^
Line 6, column 414, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...lief, they loved how you have explained the how to get relief from stress by doing mult...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 783, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a lecture' or 'another lecture'.
Suggestion: a lecture; another lecture
...ur members they suggested me to arrange an another lecture of your in near future so they will be ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Divya Secretary, Karnavati Club
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94642857143 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27057977739 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633928571429 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3075247455 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.111111111 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202155861759 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907034052611 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555732557866 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116765963684 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792448875718 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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