Writing Task 2 (an essay)
There is a trend of increasing amount of noise in our life. Why could this be a problem? What can be done to reduce it? Give your own opinion support it by examples.
Tumultuous sound and chaos on street were not heard just before 100 years ago but now everywhere we can hear noise and this is the tremendous problem of for society. In these essay I will discuss the reasons for this phenomenon and suggest some possible measures to reduce this.
The main cause of noisy situation is transportation. There is a rise in number of people who want to buy a car and who own the car and which results lot of noise due to traffic signals and horns. Another reason, over population and modernization due to this people prefer to live in a city and often dine out at cafes, go for entertainment, shopping which increases amount of sound in street.
Furthermore, live concert and live matches create noisy atmosphere which disturb the sleep of the people. Earlier, people used to celebrate festival, ocassions with small musical instruments but nowadays more and more people use big loud speaker, mike which creates noise.
To control this situation, the government can impose some tax on cars, promote the use of bicycle and public transport. Government can build separate roads for bicycle and pedestrian so people can use that to travel short distance. Moreover, government can impose the time limits on playing loud music in concerts, cafes and in festival seasons.
To put in nutshell, the noise problem is very serious and we cannot completely overcome it because we cannot say people to return to bullock age from jet plain's age but still my implementing above measures we can regulate noise and serve better society to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94318181818 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61939144598 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9542138109 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.636363636 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123269369025 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446616787373 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343043858681 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647104816462 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421291043934 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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