WRITING TASK1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it
runs, in order to save money
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
. give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses
Dear sir or Madam,
Two weeks ago, a sad Information reached out to the community about certain decision to shutting down the sports and leisure centre due to recession in the country so as to save money.
However, the physical fitness centre and relaxation venue has been a meeting point for aerobic exercise which reduces possible health problems among different classes of people. Specifically, I and my friends goes there twice a week for exercise to keep fit and also often times in the evening thrice weekly at the relaxation venue to have fun and ease the stress out. Considering the fact that Lagos state with traffic congestion causes psychological imbalances.
Furthermore, not only I and my friends would be affected but also the community at large. The sports and leisure centre fosters the bond in the environment among the lower class, middle class but also bridge the gap with high class in the environment. The three classes of people in the community meet there to have fun and perform some form of exercise.
Moreover, business ideas are also been discussed there to expand the community with infrastructures.
On the contrary, this decision would have negative impact on the native people which would result to weak interaction between the people, a common ground for socialization would be destroyed, psychological trauma and sense of happiness after day’s activities would be lost.
However, this decision would not favor the human nature which would result to abstract psychological disaster.
I look forward to a favorable decision.
Yours Faithfully
James Brown
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-02-24 | gracespeakss | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... centre due to recession in the country so as to save money. However, the physical fi...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, as to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31517509728 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79135626907 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2633360604 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0673011371062 0.216113520407 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278263770728 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387640764258 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0243866864242 0.12726935374 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283394756114 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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