Respected XYZ,
I am writing this letter in context to the equipment for cars, which your company design and supplies around the world on demand.
My name is Rachel and I am working as a Manager in a car manufacturing company, located in the capital of India, New Delhi. As we have our contracts with domestic as well as foreign renowned dealers of car parts, we are interested to make an order with your company also.
Specifically, My company wants to order for electronic gear systems, which are recently launched by you. I found those based on quite advanced technology and will surely boost up our car sales, if installed. Besides this, please provide me with the details of estimated cost per set, how it works and what supportive gadgets are needed to make it function properly.
In today's competitive era, we really need to adopt some modern technologies and innovative ideas to cope with it, otherwise we can face downfall in our sales any time.
I hope to get a reply from your side at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Rachel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...sted to make an order with your company also. Specifically, My company wants to o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, really, so, well, as for, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83977900552 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63873326048 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.71270718232 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4923681023 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173492643427 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066679500219 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843308303749 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961490069692 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103745585799 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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