Undeniably, a crime is proved when sufficient evidences are available, which clearly indicate the occurrence of the offence. Some people have the opinion that digital proofs such as photographs and video recordings are adequate enough to consider while announcing a verdict. Nevertheless, some contradict by saying that these are not the reliable sources to give an honest judgement regarding the crime.
Certainly, visual and audio data do assist the authorities to a great extent to find about the true happening of the crime scene. As nowadays, CCTV cameras are installed at most of the public as well as personal places. These equipment do supervision as human eye and provide precise details of a crime recorded. So, it leaves no trail of suspicion about the likelihood of the criminal activity performed. Such visual-aids help to clearly identify the culprits also, who committed crime.
People, who advocate the viewpoint that more proofs are needed to reach a decision, doubt the authenticity of such digital data. They believe that with the advancement in digital technology, images and videos can be easily tampered, altered and edited. Therefore, anyone can use such proofs to make an innocent person guilty and on the other hand, culprit could escape. This source of evidence could be highly delusional and misleading, so should not be the only method to make findings of the wrongdoing.
Moving ahead, I personally feel that later opinion of the people weigh more as it is not sensible to just rely on photos and videos to go in deep investigation about the crime. Surely, other solid, more trust able sources of information should be considered too to get to a final say about the happening.
- Nowadays modern gadgets are widely used by young people and the use of these products reduces their creativity Do you agree or disagree 91
- In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes Why is the case happening How should children or teenagers be punished 92
- Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in 92
- Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society?Give reasons for your answer.Write at least 250 words.(Question from: http://www.ielts-exam.net/ielts_writing_samples_task_2/728/) 11
- Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries but its disadvantages should not be overlooked 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: the
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Suggestion: the; the
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Suggestion:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13928571429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78285338442 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617857142857 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2235549052 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248811890831 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691487408127 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454863185459 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13132751258 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436892181497 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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