Dear Sir,
I am writing to appreciate your service and the meal offered to us recently. I had visited last Sunday with my friends for a dinner to celebrate my birth anniversary at around 7 pm. I really got carried away by the dishes and the hospitality.
The occasion was my birthday, as mentioned earlier. I haven't celebrated my birthday from the past five years. So, this year, my friends planned to organize a get-together on my birthday. Coincidentally, one of my friends received a promotion in his job, which added further to the festive mode. I feel glad that I chose your restaurant.
First of all, I noticed the hospitality of your staff was extremely good. They gave us a warm welcome with a lemon drink, which provoked our appetite. Secondly, the range of dishes you have was immense and we couldn't choose one, as all of them were my favorites. On top of that, I found some food toothsome, especially the shrimp pizza and the crispy chicken wings. Not to mention, the mackerel curry which which we loved the most.
I wholeheartedly appreciate your service and hope to visit again soon. Keep up the good work.
Best regards,
Prasanth G
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te my birth anniversary at around 7 pm. I really got carried away by the dishes a...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...as my birthday, as mentioned earlier. I havent celebrated my birthday from the past fi...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... Secondly, the range of dishes you have was immense and we couldnt choose one, as a...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...e of dishes you have was immense and we couldnt choose one, as all of them were my favo...
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Line 7, column 402, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: which
...ngs. Not to mention, the mackerel curry which which we loved the most. I wholeheartedly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, incidentally, really, second, secondly, so, i feel, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75742574257 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77367804071 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683168316832 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8001136891 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.0625 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.625 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146612337322 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410929208524 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372292760073 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892474745384 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290170218409 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.