You and you friend had booked theatre tickets two weeks back, but you cannot go with him, Write a letter to,
1- Apologize
2- Explain the reason
3- Suggest him what he can do with your ticket
Dear James,
I hope this letter finds you in best of your health. I am extremely disappointed that I have to write it down to you that unfortunately, I won’t be able to accompany you to our favorite comedy theatre, for which we bought tickets couple of weeks ago. I can imagine, how sad you would be by knowing this, but keep in mind that I am equally disappointed as well and I apologize for ruining up the whole plan.
I had my exam booked in for 6th of April and normally viva happens the next day of the exam but they have scheduled my viva on 2nd of April, exactly the day we were supposed to be together for the comedy show at theatre. This is very unusual schedule, never happened before and there must be a very good reason for that, which I don’t know as yet.
I have rang up the theatre management and they said, anybody can use my ticket. I was thinking if you could take Paul with you, since he was pretty excited as well to go with us, but we couldn’t find a ticket for him. I promise, in the next show, I would have a good look at my schedule and would go again together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ologize for ruining up the whole plan. I had my exam booked in for 6th of April ...
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Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'rung'.
Suggestion: rung
...which I don't know as yet. I have rang up the theatre management and they said...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...we couldn't find a ticket for him. I promise, in the next show, I would have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19248826291 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44170274992 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610328638498 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0142708783 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.625 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237042127893 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104213550036 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930679330255 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161583964772 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103550842615 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.32 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.