You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain what is wrong with the furniture
• say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr. Singh,
I have been living on the first floor of the house number 2*38, Sector 38-C on monthly basis rented accommodation for six months. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the poor condition of the furniture. All of the house furniture require urgent repair.
Let me elaborate, as you aware, essential furniture such as the couch, dining table, computer table, and washing machine are included in the house rent. But, unfortunately, furniture items are in a bad condition especially the sofa-set in the living room has the worst condition. The color of the cushion has faded out and they are not usable. The coffee table has a broken leg. Besides, the fridge in the kitchen is not maintaining the desired temperature and grocery cupboard locks are missing.
I request you to look in this matter urgently. I recommend you to arrange for the repair and maintenance of the living room furniture and replace the fridge. I would really appreciate if you could arrange the locks and keys for the cupboard.
I hope you will take the necessary action soon. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Deepak Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...g the poor condition of the furniture. All of the house furniture require urgent repair. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the worst'.
Suggestion: has the worst
... especially the sofa-set in living room has worst condition. The color of the cushion has...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... room furniture and replace the fridge. I would really appreciate if you could ar...
^
Line 6, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rrange the locks and keys for cupboard. I hope you will take the necessary acti...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the locks and keys for cupboard. I hope you will take the necessary action...
^
Line 8, column 50, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou will take the necessary action soon. I look forward to hearing from you. Y...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, really, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05789473684 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70512491967 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4831156541 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6428571429 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209692621918 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605510583896 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399136070316 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101644939626 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148051062181 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.