You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .................,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Rajesh,
My name is Manjyot Kaur, a tenant residing at your Castleview flat at Brampton. Though it is a wonderful experience living in this locality, I would like to draw your attention to the furniture of the accommodation my family and I are using.
The outer profiles appears clean and neat but the interiors of the wardrobes we in a preposterous condition. The channels of drawers are very stiff. Also, the hinges of the shutter are weak. We are facing faint odour from these wardrobes and strongly believe that there is a high chance of termite attack. Currently these furniture are not in usable condition, hence we have kept most of our clothing apparel in the suitcases which is difficult to uses every now and then.
Therefore, I humbly request you to call for a carpenter who can visit our home premises anytime during the day. I would really appreciate if you could also look for pest control services with immediate effect as this odour get stronger day by day.
Thank you for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you
Yours sincerely,
Manjyot Kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'appear'.
Suggestion: appear
... and I are using. The outer profiles appears clean and neat but the interiors of the...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this furniture' or 'these furnitures'?
Suggestion: this furniture; these furnitures
...igh chance of termite attack. Currently these furniture are not in usable condition, hence we h...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...he suitcases which is difficult to uses every now and then. Therefore, I humbly request you to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, really, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89417989418 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64650774558 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.714891462 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0909090909 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181452660219 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637921152039 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695884410308 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107108016598 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690616688254 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.