You and your family are moving to another country, and you are looking for rented accommodation there.
Write a letter to a property agent. in your letter
- Introduce yourself and your family
- Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find
- Give your preference for the location of the accommodation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request your assistance in getting a suitable property in Australia where my family and I will move in next month.
My name is Ayoub. We are not that big family as it consists only of my lovely wife and one infant, his name is Ezz. When we decided to immigrate, we could not have a better choice to ask your company assistance to advise us for the best accommodation to rent.
Although we live in a small apartment in our city, we aim to find a large apartment in Australia. Therefore, I would request that you review the current available options of two bed rooms flat within Sydney and advise us accordingly. The flat should be at ground floor with a large garden where my kid can play with his peers. a considerable area of balcony is enough for us to relax during the weekend.
The best location where I request you to search is in the city center near to the local transportation and hyper-markets. You know that I will be looking for jobs once arriving Sydney, so I will be moving around by the local transportation, and my wife won`t be having a driving licence to get our grocery very easily.
I look forward to receiving your feedback.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...n where my kid can play with his peers. a considerable area of balcony is enough ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, look, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57918552036 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72806026527 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2868025626 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198579733538 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705767322494 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054612897468 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112078920258 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386109910018 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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