You and your family are moving to another country and looking for rent accommodation. Write a letter to property agent.
. introduce yourself and your family
. describe a type of accommodation.
.give your preference for location
Dear Sir,
I am writing to rent an accommodation in Sydney, Australia. I would appreciate if you could arrange it for me.
I am 30 years old, married women from Pakistan, Lahore. I have small unit family with my husband and two children. My husband, who is an engineer by profession, recently got a new job in Australia. He has to join his firm next week, so we are planning to travel by the end of July.
I would prefer to have a two bed room apartment with a fully equipped kitchen and living room. What’s more, internet facilities and television should also be included. It is convenient to have a parking space. If possible, I would like to rent a flat with a balcony facing sea.
As far as a location is considered, building must be in city centre since my husband office is few miles from there. It should have easy access to shopping malls, restaurants and subway station. On the top, the good schools must be near to place where I could send my kids for studies.
Please tell me know that how much this kind of accommodation would cost me.
I am looking forward to hearing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Sara Batool.
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| 2019-07-14 | Sara Batool | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
Dear Sir, I am writing to rent an accommodation in Sydney, Australia. I would appreciat...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d, married women from Pakistan, Lahore. I have small unit family with my husband ...
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Line 6, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tchen and living room. What's more, internet facilities and television shou...
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Line 6, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...living room. What's more, internet facilities and television should also be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58252427184 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63350297525 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684466019417 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8102613464 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.0 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.875 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105387740545 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341091890239 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429509242009 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478393169128 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044066633765 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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