You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know:
when you will be arriving and leaving
what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost
inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to make the bookings for 3 double bedrooms at your hotel. I am exhilarated to arrive on this weekend i.e 8th June and will be departing on 10th June.
One of my friends suggested me to organize a family trip to your hotel which includes some sightseeing near your vicinity.
We will be arriving in afternoon on the saturday and the total number of peoples are 6 including 2 children. I am interested in taking accomodation on the beach side cottages which are near the church. Moreover, my family prefers to have vegetarian and I would be interested to take package which compromises lunch and dinner. Do you host any beach sports on weeekends like volley ball, snorkling, etc. as my kids would be really interested to do some.
Would it be possible for you to provide me the list of activities with fees? Are there any local market nearby where we can buy souvenirs? Also, provide me the approximate cost for 2 days which including above requisite requirements. If there is any advance payments, I am willing to pay it and let me know by what mode of payment.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's Faithfully
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours Faithfully Apoorva Chikara
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67772511848 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6979773501 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649289099526 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0404227165 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263376489978 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792891001087 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500051019551 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132288121434 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430548074213 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.