You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements.
Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving
What type of rooms you would like,
and ask them how much the weekend will cost.
Also enquire about the activities and places of interest near the hotel.
I am a guest going to visit your seaside hotel "Grand Emperia" with my immediate family.
My booking id number is Azko123. I am writing this letter mainly to specify a few of my requirements
related to my stay and enquire about the rates, recreational activities, and interesting places
nearby hotel.
To add to the detail of our visit, we will arrive on is 20th, June at 6:30 a:m and depart on
23rd, June at 10:30 p:m. I would like to have one non-smoking, air-conditioned, double bedroom, and one non-smoking, air-conditioned suite. Since the hotel is near the sea, I shall be obliged if you could arrange our rooms on the top floor,
so that we could enjoy the panoramic view of the sea. Besides this, as you could notice our arrival day is Saturday;
therefore, I want to know the expenses, if needed to bear due to the weekend. I request you to please share the detailed itinerary of the hotel which specifies the prices, as well as the facilities hotels, offers to a guest during the stay.
Also, it would be very helpful to me, if you could suggest to me, any informative yet recreational area,
in particular, museum and historical monuments near the hotel.
I hope I am not putting so many efforts on you.
Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanking you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Mike Ross
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...inly to specify a few of my requirements related to my stay and enquire about the...
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...ional activities, and interesting places nearby hotel. To add to the detail of...
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... is 20th, June at 6:30 a:m and depart on 23rd, June at 10:30 p:m. I would like to...
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...ould notice our arrival day is Saturday; therefore, I want to know the expenses, ...
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..., any informative yet recreational area, in particular, museum and historical mon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, therefore, well, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79310344828 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85390401611 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5133635101 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5384615385 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260198599828 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819175076124 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412820571515 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827281463359 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440709382609 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.