You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord.
– Describe the problems.
– Tell him what you want him to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to convey about the repairs you refused to finish before lending your apartment. The flat was damn good with excellent interiors and furniture.
Therefore, there are some problems like incomplete woodwork in kitchen. At the same time, room doors have not got fixed with the lock systems. These two are damn important to be completed.As we already shifted to the house. Because all the stuff of work has been placed in cooking area creating much inconvenience to move around. Accordingly, main door is also not having bolt, without security how can we survive tonight. In this case, you would have informed us prior so that we would come some other day.
Hence, I want it to be cleared from your side as a part of our agreement. Because, the dust left by carpenters causing suffocation to breath. We rented this house as you promised to finish all the incomplete one's and handover us but you didn't fullfilled.So I request you clear all these problems as early as possible.
I here by will be waiting for your response soon.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
Abc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this to convey about the re...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
... two are damn important to be completed.As we already shifted to the house. Becaus...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... two are damn important to be completed.As we already shifted to the house. Becaus...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ted.As we already shifted to the house. Because all the stuff of work has been placed i...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m your side as a part of our agreement. Because, the dust left by carpenters causing su...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...incomplete ones and handover us but you didnt fullfilled.So I request you clear all t...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...nd handover us but you didnt fullfilled.So I request you clear all these problems ...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Thanking you. Yours faithfully, Abc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8835978836 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59047532593 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.724867724868 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6420439056 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191755855131 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581654035183 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548985221275 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947682245117 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496952035249 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.