Dear Tom,
How are you? Hope your are doing well.
As per our last conversation, we are going to the Lake Resort located out of the city centre tomorrow.
Let’s have some check list and assure what we have or which additions we need to do.
Firstly, please be informed that I arrenged the car, so that I talked to Jane’s brother, Mike, to give me a power of attorney to get an allowance to drive his car. He promised to deliver it to me until 7 pm today. Therefore, we will be able to arrange our trip as we wish.
Then, I asked my father about the activities that we can enjoy, around the Lake area and he suggested me to have a boat for surfing through the Araz river. He said it is easy to find a small boat in the entrance of the Hotel. It will be amazing to see littlr fiords around the river. We definetely must do it!
Finally, I am strongly asking you to bring an extra boots for me. I know you have green ones that your sister gifted to you two weeks ago. Because I do not have any.
In conclusion, see you in the parking area near to our house at 8 am tomorrow morning. Mike will deliver his car to that area.
See you tomorrow!
Regards,
Russle
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...our sister gifted to you two weeks ago. Because I do not have any. In conclusion, se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23788546256 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21813932293 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63436123348 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0665903594 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.125 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171619503629 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571794271171 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521551309958 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847254190802 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691795411427 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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