You and your friend booked a theater tickets in advance. Apology to your friend as you can't make it to the theater with him.
In the letter, you should:
apologies
explain what reasons you can’t make it
give options what can be done with the ticket.
Dear Ankush,
I am writing to apologize for not accompanying you tomorrow for the theatre show, which we have pre-booked a week ago.
I am extremely sorry to inform you about this at last moment. Unfortunately, my foot tripped and I fell sideways when I was going to grocery yesterday. I tried to get up but could not stand. Later, I realized I had sprained my ankle. Thanks to those kind persons who were there. They helped me to get up and took me to doctor in vicinity. Doctor has highly recommended to rest for two days for speedy recovery. That is why I am unable to walk and join you.
At the same time, I understand your love for the theatre and how excited you are to watch this show. Therefore, I asked my brother to accompany you tomorrow and he agreed. This way we need not to bother for ticket cancellation and refund. Lastly, I would say don't worry about me. I would be fine in two days.
Once again sorry for not making it this time. Hope you won't mind.
Enjoy and have lots of fun.
Best wishes,
Ell Green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bother'?
Suggestion: bother
...row and he agreed. This way we need not to bother for ticket cancellation and refund. Las...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...llation and refund. Lastly, I would say dont worry about me. I would be fine in two ...
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Line 13, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lots of fun. Best wishes, Ell Green
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, lastly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41450777202 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40147475428 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668393782383 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7771878961 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 47.3333333333 76.5299724578 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.7222222222 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143485161581 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414198908414 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479678105715 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812108196474 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475716055364 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.11 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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