Dear sir,
Greetings of the day! I am writing this letter to seek your reference as I want to apply for a communication manager in a renowned company.
As a matter of fact, job description includes the resolving of communication barriers facing by the company among its different departments. Apart from it, how to make the strong bonds among employees would also be a part of this job duty.
That being said, having a reference from former teacher would certainly provide me an additional benefit at the recruitment stage, and, moreover it is listed as a mandatory document by the company in order to being recruited there.
Therefore, I humbly request you, not only to put some details about my personality traits, but also regarding my academic excellence in your college on the reference letter. I would certainly appreciate this kind act from your side.
I hope you would understand the genuinity of the situation. Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours sincerely,
Maria
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13580246914 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94800752399 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8016351454 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4444444444 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293707163137 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103047986659 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067737753854 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138653872595 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763815564966 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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