You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the course to the course provider. In your letter,
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear John,
I am writing this letter to tell you that I am not able to move to your apartment next month, the month of April, as we mentioned in our contract.
In fact, I rented your apartment because I had applied to a company in your city. My job will start in the next month. Unfortunately, my current company developer had a car accident. As their project is about to release to the customer, I have discussed with my new organization and will extend my support for the current company for about 15 days. After that, I will be going to your city as normal.
Since I really like your apartment because it is cosy and especially close to my new office, I ask your favour of keeping our contract. I will be moving in by the end of next month. In addition, I am willing to pay the cost for this month as well.
I am looking forward to seeing your response.
Truthfully yours,
Vien Mai.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... willing to pay the cost for this month also. Truthfully yours, Vien Mai....
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to pay the cost for this month also. Truthfully yours, Vien Mai.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39375 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48683251095 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4595794564 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292862613503 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111640792762 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899609456428 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211461476311 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566437060418 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.