You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am an employee of First Sale Ltd. Company. By a chance, I got to know that your institution will organize a seminar related to Advanced Marketing Tooling. Therefore, I am writing this letter to ask you for more information about it.
Firstly, I want to know your schedule on when it will be starting, and what topic will be covered each session. This is helpful for me to decide whether the program suits my need or not. Besides that, does your institution support finding accommodation or I have to manage it myself? In fact, the place is far from my home so I need to stay there. Finally, please tell me about the cost for one person to attend the seminar. In addition, do you have a discount for early registration?
I am looking forward to hearing your response.
Faithfully yours,
Vien Mai.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, look, so, therefore, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63513513514 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64957926288 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.702702702703 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7656787304 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.3636363636 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4545454545 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178352696739 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604622302998 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723365384861 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10203701316 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748017455791 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.