You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give details of your study plans
• explain why you want to get a part-time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sam,
I am elated to inform you that I will be moving to England, during Spring next year. I have got admission
to pursue my 'Certified Internal Auditor' course and am writing to you to seek help to find a part
time job during my stay in England.
My course spans over a period of 4 months commencing on 7th April next year and is going to cost me a fortune.
I am required to attend lectures during the mornings and will have some course work to be submitted every 10 days. My evenings will
be relatively free. Hence I would like to utilise this time to work.
As you are aware, I am funding the course myself and would like to have some supplementary income to fund part of the
tution fees as well as my stay whilst in England. I understand you are working for an
audit firm 'PWC' and they are looking for part-time interns. It would be great if you could
arrange to send them my resume and follow-up for an interview. Having the PWC tag under work experience
will definitely add value to my resume for any future job prospects.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Tommy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...y Certified Internal Auditor course and am writing to you to seek help to find a p...
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Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...m writing to you to seek help to find a part time job during my stay in England. My co...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
.... My evenings will be relatively free. Hence I would like to utilise this time to wo...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...supplementary income to fund part of the tution fees as well as my stay whilst in...
^^^
Line 12, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and. I understand you are working for an audit firm PWC and they are looking for ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45893719807 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3594669764 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5036671398 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9090909091 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.29896907216 279% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192031316324 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755034577223 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583852661379 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838584970193 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574321204569 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.