You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend.
In your letter:
Give details of your study plans
Explain why you want to get a part-time job
Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Hi Rupi,
I Hope you are doing well. It's been a while that we both have connected and spoke with each other. I have good news for you my friend. I have been selected by the Humber University for the April'2021 Project Management course. Isn’t that an excitement news! This is a two Years course similar to what you did. I will be staying at the college hostel for couple of days until I find my own accommodation.
I remember, once you told me that you are doing a part-time job at Pizza hut along with your studies. I hope you still have some contact there? Once I will come there, I will need a Part-Time job to pay back my Loan amount which I have taken to pay fees at the university and also sustain my daily needs here at Canada.
I know that it’s been a while that you have not worked at the Pizza hut but it will be very helpful if you can speak with your Manager at the restaurant for me and give high regards for me. I am fine with the position offered as I understand that I don't have much experience in the hotel industry though I will definitely work hard and learn things as soon as possible.
I believe you will help me for finding this job.
Hope to see you soon. Take care.
Regards,
AV
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...b at Pizza hut along with your studies. I hope you still have some contact there?...
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Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...position offered as I understand that I dont have much experience in the hotel indus...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and learn things as soon as possible. I believe you will help me for finding th...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18803418803 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25903111195 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598290598291 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5683266697 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3846153846 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281662588824 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113507443831 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101275990149 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184182321493 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351323551634 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.