You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Hi John,
I am planning to study Computer Science in German, but I don't have enough money to support my living there. So I want you to help me with employment in your city.
As the cost of living in Berlin is higher than in Karaganda, I feel uncertain that I will be able to make ends meet, while studying in your hometown. Despite this financial problem, I am eager to study in Europe at any cost. As a solution, I've decided to find a part-time job, so that I can afford to live without burdening my parents. However, I need some assistance with occupation, because I don't know the city very well. I can do a great variety of jobs, such as washing the dishes, cleaning houses and looking after children. As you can see, I am not afraid of work. Please, find out much information about available vacancies for students and send it to my email address “tolikxxx@rambler.ru” before my arrival in Berlin. It would help me to see what kind of job I can expect and prepare my resume in advance.
I would also be grateful to you, if you do it asap, since my parents are worried about my departure to another country. They want to know that I would lead a normal lifestyle in German.
Best wishes,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, while, i feel, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52466367713 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01392666573 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650224215247 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 1.83505154639 490% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9829845466 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6153846154 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252102677977 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831449654447 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910154540972 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193834090129 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309061222573 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.