You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying , so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend .In your letter
. Give details of your study plans
.Explain why you want to get a part-time job
.Suggest how your friend could help you fin a job
Write at least 150 words
Dear Minh,
How has your family been ? thanks for your letter great new about your new house . congratulations on the dream you have achieved .
I’m learning biology research at Havard University . The first exam had been complete , so I’m free in the next two month . As you know, my hobby is enjoy exploring a learning about everything around me so I want find a job part-time that it is nearby place I live
A job part-time will has more chance learn about everything when I work an It helps me solving problem about good money management skills . I will have a lot of experience and can be applied in the future
Coul you help me find It ? This is because you are a local here and know many places where they need recruit staff.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Minh, How has your family been ? thanks for your letter great new ...
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Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanks
...Dear Minh, How has your family been ? thanks for your letter great new about your ne...
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Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ur letter great new about your new house . congratulations on the dream you have a...
^^
Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Congratulations
...letter great new about your new house . congratulations on the dream you have achieved . I&apo...
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Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tulations on the dream you have achieved . I'm learning biology research at ...
^^
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng biology research at Havard University . The first exam had been complete , so I...
^^
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rsity . The first exam had been complete , so I'm free in the next two month ...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., so I'm free in the next two month . As you know, my hobby is enjoy explorin...
^^
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...xt two month . As you know, my hobby is enjoy exploring a learning about everything ...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oy exploring a learning about everything around me so I want find a job part-time...
^^
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...part-time that it is nearby place I live A job part-time will has more chance lea...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...rby place I live A job part-time will has more chance learn about everything when...
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Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hance learn about everything when I work an It helps me solving problem about goo...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'It'?
Suggestion: an; It
...nce learn about everything when I work an It helps me solving problem about good mon...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to solve' or 'solve'.
Suggestion: to solve; solve
... everything when I work an It helps me solving problem about good money management ski...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oblem about good money management skills . I will have a lot of experience and c...
^^
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...od money management skills . I will have a lot of experience and can be applied ...
^^
Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kills . I will have a lot of experience and can be applied in the future Coul ...
^^
Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rience and can be applied in the future Coul you help me find It ? This is becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 607.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 134.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52985074627 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45390959231 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.738805970149 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5937958211 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.875 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239310515328 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881347525388 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525773547596 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139923673946 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603335728805 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.