You have recently moved to a different houseWrite a letter to an english-speaking friend. In your letter, you should. explain why you have moved.describe the new house. invite your friend to come and visitWrite at least 15o words

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You have recently moved to a different house
Write a letter to an english-speaking friend. In your letter, you should
. explain why you have moved
.describe the new house
. invite your friend to come and visit
Write at least 15o words

Dear TOM,
It was great to hear from you again . How are you? I hope you a your family are well .
I do not see again when your family were movie to Da lat . I just get into a new company at S-o-n-a-d-i-z-e , so that I had moved home on last month . this is nearby my work place , where I am going to work at next two weeks .
Well, I support when I live here . It , my house, is vary big and modern by European style . The wall is painted is white and is decorated very more rose with baby’s breath . there are three bed room both living very large can play for fun and unwind all day . A big garden , It has lots of shade tree , enough to have outside parties that not worried about harsh sun .
If you are able to arrange your time, you can go to my house with your family . We would be very happy We’ll hold a small party a sing songs karaoke together .
Give my regards to your family .
Best wishes,
ANH
ANH PHAM.
199 tu

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Dear TOM, It was great to hear from you aga...
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Dear TOM, It was great to hear from you again . Ho...
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...M, It was great to hear from you again . How are you? I hope you a your family a...
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...rom you again . How are you? I hope you a your family are well . I do not see again w...
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...e you? I hope you a your family are well . I do not see again when your family we...
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...in when your family were movie to Da lat . I just get into a new company at S-o-...
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...hen your family were movie to Da lat . I just get into a new company at S-o-n-a-...
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...ur family were movie to Da lat . I just get into a new company at S-o-n-a-d-i-z-...
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...et into a new company at S-o-n-a-d-i-z-e , so that I had moved home on last month...
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...i-z-e , so that I had moved home on last month . this is nearby my work place , w...
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...st month . this is nearby my work place , where I am going to work at next two w...
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... nearby my work place , where I am going to work at next two weeks . Well, I su...
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...re I am going to work at next two weeks . Well, I support when I live here . I...
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... next two weeks . Well, I support when I live here . It , my house, is vary bi...
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... Well, I support when I live here . It , my house, is vary big and modern by Eu...
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Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...rt when I live here . It , my house, is vary big and modern by European style . ...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
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... when I live here . It , my house, is vary big and modern by European style . The ...
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...s vary big and modern by European style . The wall is painted is white and is dec...
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Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...d very more rose with baby's breath . there are three bed room both living ve...
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...ery more rose with baby's breath . there are three bed room both living very la...
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...here are three bed room both living very large can play for fun and unwind all...
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...ery large can play for fun and unwind all day . A big garden , It has lots of...
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...regards to your family . Best wishes, ANH ANH PHAM. 199 tu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.09836065574 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04277177187 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.726775956284 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9166596473 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.0 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 2.54639175258 1767% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188012043101 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615866027249 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746548080595 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113271989171 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722229142333 0.0580467560999 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.0 8.37731958763 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.61 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.7 7.59969072165 75% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.