You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• give details of your study plans
• explain why you want to get a part-time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Navneet,
How are you? I hope you are doing well great at foreign land in your business. I am writing this letter to inform you that I get selected at York University for a master’s course in microbiology. My course is a full-time activity for 2 years duration and it will help me to become a professional in microbiology testing especially in pathogens handling.
However, the course fee is high as per my budget, earnings will aid my tuition fees during the study in Canada. The salary for part-time work will also help me to save some money for my future expenses. Therefore, I have decided to do a part-time job simultaneously with education.
I came to know that you are also living near York University, so you will be the best person for me to help in a job search. I insist you to please contact your local residence regarding any opportunity if they are aware in nearby. Please let me know as early as possible if you come across with the vacancy.
Hope to see you in Canada soon.
Best wishes,
Vishal
India
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Navneet, How are you? I hope you are doing well g...
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Line 11, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou in Canada soon. Best wishes, Vishal India
^^^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nada soon. Best wishes, Vishal India
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62365591398 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75182698222 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6466160809 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318321828491 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11316932149 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668136113105 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185331977825 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662267950548 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.