You are going to London for a visit and you would like to spend two days in visiting library as you are doing research project Write a letter to the library assistant asking him her for help and specifying your requirements

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You are going to London for a visit, and you would like to spend two days in visiting library as you are doing research project. Write a letter to the library assistant, asking him/her for help and specifying your requirements.

I , Ankit Prajapati, is a student of 2nd year science at the M.S University. I am writing this letter to ask you for your kind aid for completion of my project. My requirements are being elaborated in further discussion.

As I told that I am a student at The M.S University and I had taken special biogenetic project for 2nd year on aquatic animals and our professor Mr. Suresh Desai , acquired Ph. D from Cambridge London, has also involved in this project and he has given your reference. I am on two days of visit on this project in London . Furthermore , in this project , I need your help to screen critical points and extract the prominent books which are only available here. Also, I will need your special heed on this work because it is a valuable project.

Secondly, I am new to this province I require your guidance in the affordable accommodation where easily transportation to library is available . Moreover, I will need two days special pass ticket for allow in and out library.

I am exited on this trip and I have affirmation for getting right assistance from your side on this project.

In anticipation with your earliest reply.

Yours sincerely,
Ankit Prajapati

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273127753304 0.220444632235 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.136563876652 0.167888034529 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0660792951542 0.0606518309736 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0352422907489 0.0506257000042 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.114537444934 0.118615021944 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132158590308 0.107062808482 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0352422907489 0.041066498444 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87793647639 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0176211453744 0.0385302599488 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0660792951542 0.0714148451538 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00881057268722 0.0191574576366 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00881057268722 0.00930345855455 95% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1221.0 1141.60824742 107% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.134020619 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78672985782 5.53046319177 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78085437643 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308056872038 0.284621296913 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265402843602 0.211203875043 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170616113744 0.133321485273 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118483412322 0.0843313296314 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87793647639 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.622163163488 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.7066056572 62.8969750728 89% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.2307692308 16.4300151701 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4076287171 44.7399317507 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9230769231 90.9928171075 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.4300151701 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.613754768223 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 2.09278350515 1768% => OK
Readability: 42.771053591 37.5504026743 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.53846153846 1.13073093955 136% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331895944981 0.331212695627 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0709348380802 0.0927372745006 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0445719134717 0.0736520305886 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600687504964 0.579516596996 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.195752116413 0.180689518051 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116951502874 0.122183219658 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752277694663 0.0765303033291 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.168825982739 0.211926503985 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0908581422818 0.0737400523855 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177241127612 0.203819188451 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843436455167 0.067151250289 126% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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