You are going on a short trip to another country, where one of your friends lives. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Give the details of your trip
Tel him/her about your plans
Ask him/her some questions
Hello, Victor. How is it going?
It’s been a long time not hearing from you. I hope everything is fine and your life is going smoothly right now.
I have great news for you. Next month I have a vacation and I’ve decided to visit Canada and will be happy to meet with you as well. So, I will arrive on the 5th September and stay in Toronto till 12th.
As you see I have only a week and have to manage to visit all the famous attractions around such as Niagara Falls, which is the first in my must-have-seen-list. Also, it would be great to listen to the symphony orchestra in Casa Loma, try different cuisines in St. Lawrence Market and go for a walk in the High Park. I’ve read that the latter has many hiking trails, diverse vegetation, a zoo, a picnic area and so on.
So, what do you think about it? What else should I visit and try to do? Will you join me for the trip to Niagara or probably other activities?
Looking forward to your earliest answer.
Take care,
Your friend Maria
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| 2022-08-11 | Mariamirabella | 68 | view |
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- In many countries people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing Why is this the case Is this a positive or negative development 67
- Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation To what extent do you agree or disagree 74
- Some people would say that parents should pay their children for small home duties cleaning washing dishes Other would disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 81
- Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person s income The health of a person is in their own hands and they should therefore be held accountable for that Do you agree with this opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to your earliest answer. Take care, Your friend Maria
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36507936508 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39278658046 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4516104103 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.9285714286 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15349387264 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570869418694 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073738618052 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744793931258 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587999038365 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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