There is an opinion that it is not necessary to spend time learning languages as modern electronic translators interpret from language to language quickly and precisely. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this idea because any language was designed for effective communication and a translating device can aid it but cannot replace it.
Some people who believe that studying foreign languages is wasting of time, they would probably argue that machine translation is accurate and quick, while learning another language is time consuming. To illustrate, a computer can translate bunch of different text on a vast range of topics on a blink of an eye. This is because it contains huge amount of data and dictionaries from the different fields of science from history and art to industry and business.
However, computer cannot help us went we need to hold life-conversations and need to give quick emotional response to our opponent. If we tried to use any translator during a conversation, it would definitely harm the communication processes. In addition, computer translation is not perfect and a person, which does not know a target language, is not able to correct a machine translation in case of mistake. Inevitably, usage of incorrect translation will lead to misunderstanding and probably conflicts with a foreign person. For example, once I was using google translate for transferring from Russian to Mongolian. As a result, I was completely misunderstood and my Mongolian friends were frustrated because of it.
In conclusion, I totally disagree with the motion of the abundance of learning foreign language as modern technologies can help us to translate written language but for effective communication, we have to understand a foreign person ourselves and thus to spend sufficient amount of time learning languages.
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- Some people would say that parents should pay their children for small home duties cleaning washing dishes Other would disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 81
- It is important to give children the chance to act independently and make their own decisions from early age. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea? 56
- Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land What solution is better 68
- It was predicted that people in the 21 century would have much more free time than in the past To what extent has this prediction come true 93
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34364261168 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23776268286 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7264390641 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308512790218 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106158293445 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954725138575 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203093664397 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045087978337 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.