You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring)
Dear Mr./Madam.,
I think you will be surprised when you read this letter. This is Mojtaba; your friend Ali’s cousin. I guess we met each other once before in my cousin’s house.
I have been invited to two conferences in your country near your city. Since it is the first time that I am going to your country and I don’t have any friends there, my cousin suggested me write to you and ask for some information about your city. Actually, the two conferences will be held at the interval of three weeks. I have enough time to take a vacation and prepare my presentation as well.
Could you give me some information about well-known places in your city or suggest some activities that I can do in 3 weeks between 2 conferences? Finally, please let me know what equipment should I bring with myself.
I look forward to hearing from you if you have time to write back.
Best wishes,
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'i guess', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.186440677966 0.220444632235 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.19209039548 0.167888034529 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0282485875706 0.0606518309736 47% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.045197740113 0.0506257000042 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.169491525424 0.118615021944 143% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101694915254 0.107062808482 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0338983050847 0.041066498444 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55132115044 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0338983050847 0.0385302599488 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0621468926554 0.0714148451538 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0282485875706 0.0191574576366 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112994350282 0.00930345855455 121% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 886.0 1141.60824742 78% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.134020619 78% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50310559006 5.53046319177 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78085437643 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.267080745342 0.284621296913 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204968944099 0.211203875043 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.111801242236 0.133321485273 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0869565217391 0.0843313296314 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55132115044 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670807453416 0.622163163488 108% => OK
Word variations: 67.1778647708 62.8969750728 107% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6363636364 16.4300151701 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1378723752 44.7399317507 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5454545455 90.9928171075 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.4300151701 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 0.613754768223 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 7.22680412371 55% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Readability: 35.1332580463 37.5504026743 94% => OK
Elegance: 0.791666666667 1.13073093955 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429738136713 0.331212695627 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.067786689993 0.0927372745006 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785564741987 0.0736520305886 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571819518751 0.662452444078 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192083585639 0.233577193048 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143059734735 0.122183219658 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106049094632 0.0765303033291 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.115491531183 0.110270004696 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0560480208672 0.120535355502 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244372693648 0.120397337282 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722096108822 0.113578534861 64% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.54639175258 66% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.0824742268 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.62886597938 76% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 8.25773195876 61% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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