Dear Jane,
Hope you are doing great! I’ve got an amazing news to tell you. I’ll be hosting a party this weekend at my place and wanted to cook the Ratatouille dish. But I’ve lost the recipe and hence need a little bit of your help.
Recently, I was awarded the best employee for this financial year and received a promotion form a Junior Manager to The Senior Manager for the sales department. Seeing this as a wonderful opportunity to have a get-together, I’ve decided to have a party at my place. I’ve invited a few of my colleagues, relatives and friends.
The dish from the movie Ratatouille, is what I’ve planned to cook. The one with a variety of pepper and raw vegetables all baked together in the oven. Sounds amazing isn’t it. But unfortunately, I’ve lost the recipe which you had handwritten for me. Please share with me a copy of the recipe if you have one, else you could guide me while I cook. That would be fun too.
You are a major part of my journey and so it’s impossible that I celebrate my special day without you. So please do join me this Saturday, on 12th at 5 pm at my place. Don’t get any gifts just the recipe will do. I’ll be waiting for you.
Lots of love,
Adlen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'amazing news'.
Suggestion: amazing news
...ne, Hope you are doing great! I’ve got an amazing news to tell you. I’ll be hosting a party th...
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Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...t I’ve lost the recipe and hence need a little bit of your help. Recently, I was awarded ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...financial year and received a promotion form a Junior Manager to The Senior Manager ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43111111111 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47689969493 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3873278983 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6470588235 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2352941176 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.47058823529 4.34317383033 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255498690015 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071014861493 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564799700996 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154298715044 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705837923164 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.