You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
tell your friend why you are having a party
explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe
invite your friend to the party
Dear Jini,
How are you ? Hope this letter finds you well . I’m glad to tell you that I've achieved first position in my engineering entrance exams and I'm going to organise a party on Sunday, 30th September to share my happiness with all my close ones.
I'm planning to cook butter chicken as a main course for everyone and I would need your help in that. I know you’re a superb cook and you’ve a good hand in Indian cuisine. As this dish is very popular among all age groups, and I have tried it myself many times but i’ve never succeeded in making it. I’d be really thankful if you could send me the recipe for butter chicken.
I’d like to invite you to celebrate this special occasion in my life. My family and all my best buddies would be coming and I’d really want to see you. I’ve arranged for some music, as well as some interesting games. I’m sure we’ll have a blast together.
Waiting for your response.
Yours lovingly
Ishween kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re you ? Hope this letter finds you well . I’m glad to tell you that Ive achieved ...
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Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ds you well . I’m glad to tell you that Ive achieved first position in my engineeri...
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Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...on in my engineering entrance exams and Im going to organise a party on Sunday, 30...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...my happiness with all my close ones. Im planning to cook butter chicken as a ma...
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Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I’ve'?
Suggestion: I’ve
...d I have tried it myself many times but i’ve never succeeded in making it. I’d be re...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...end me the recipe for butter chicken. I’d like to invite you to celebrate this...
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Line 6, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing and I’d really want to see you. I’ve arranged for some music, as well as some...
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Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting for your response. Yours lovingly Ishween kaur
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Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esponse. Yours lovingly Ishween kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54857142857 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20722540272 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702857142857 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9818590419 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2307692308 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317001292161 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107839628674 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529689661195 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178049335949 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462323822283 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.