Dear John
I'm writing this letter to let you know that I will be throwing a party in London on New Year''s Eve by 8:00 pm.
The party will make up for my lack of socializing and also to ease stress. This year has been very busy for me due to my work schedule, I work 80 hours per week and to be honest with you I do not have any spare time to socialize.
I would love to make "Afang Soup" for the guests at my party and will be grateful if you fill me in on the recipe to prepare this great dish. The expectations are high and majority of my colleagues attending love very tasty dishes.
I'm also inviting you for this party. It's been ages since we saw. I remember the last time we spent together was in Paris where we attended a carnival together with family and friends. The trip was fun especially the fact that uncle Mike let us use his private jet for a round trip and ofcourse we have good memories of this particular journey.
I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best. Richard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... in London on New Years Eve by 8:00 pm. ...
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... will make up for my lack of socializing and also to ease stress. This year has b...
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...o not have any spare time to socialize. ...
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...agues attending love very tasty dishes. ...
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...od memories of this particular journey. ...
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... I hope to hear from you soon. ...
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... All the best. Richard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22164948454 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24887047852 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634020618557 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.6682768652 44.8134815571 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 74.4545454545 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160158638998 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057237834906 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522245499629 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693031807687 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511612225149 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.