you are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign University.
write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter
* Explain which course you interested in
* Tell what you know about the university
* Explain why you should receive the scholarship.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to let you know about the scholarship and the psychology subject which is my interesting study field.
The University of Harvard is the world's largest education center since began its journey in 1989. I am interested to admit here because renowned Scholar background and the world standard scholarship, which lead my dream to the desired stage. On the other hand, a beautifully landscaped campus, residential area, dormitory, and library including antique architects inspired me with overwhelming.
In this regard, I am applying for such a scholarly subject under the Lamond foundation scholarships program. If the authority of the scholarship council provides me with financial aid for the entire study tenure, I will be grateful to the authority because we are competing for a famous stipend from the least developed country. The scholarship lead me to a outstanding research route name "Human philosophy and the political conflict under the power politics.
I would greatly appreciate the opportunity while you respond through the core senate body of the scholarship.
Kind regards,
Queen Reina
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
...ield. The University of Harvard is the worlds largest education center since began its journe...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('scholarly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('subject') instead of another adjective.
... In this regard, I am applying for such a scholarly subject under the Lamond foundation scholarship...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ped country. The scholarship lead me to a outstanding research route name 'H...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44632768362 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01749926215 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694915254237 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5203279278 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.111111111 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203438158826 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724958504843 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080895421879 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142301698224 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102647546734 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.