You have recently broken your leg and your colleagues visited with getting well soon card, presents. write a letter do
Thank them
Describe how you have been spending while recovering
Tell me some information about your recovery.
Dear Xinxian,
I am written with regarding your welcome present while you and my favorite colleagues visited my house to show condolence of my accident.
Thank you, again for your co-operation to arrange a group of friends from the school to the employment circle. I have received your multifarious colorful gift Cards, renowned book name Timothy Penneame written by Mich Frawden, and DVD player game that is my most interesting time passing corner.
You know, the recent time I can not reutilize my previous task. My recovering time is being helped by following your physical therapy treatment. In addition to the pain of my left leg knee and toe of my foot point view. Though your scientific idea is being out of reasonably treated I have taken every dawn to dusk. You know happy that most populous series of the American dream show which is being celebrated and telecasted by renowned CNN presenter Anni Hathawy, absolutely take part with my family members. On the other hand, some of the official tasks left since a long day ago. I have completed such a giant engine operating manure.
In the meantime, I am trying to get soon as per the consultancy guideline of my family and special therapy. The ligament of my both leg relaxing gradually to taking mussel therapy. Now, I am standing still walking without any aid of physical instruments that can not afford before the month you have visited.
Do you know those who are giving me valuable emergency treatment? I hope you will help me for the time being of my recovery as early as possible.
Kinds Regards,
Samantha Sing
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 7, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
Dear Xinxian, I am write with regarding to your welcome present ...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ee and toe of my foot point view. Though , your scientifically idea is being out o...
^^
Line 4, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... series of the American dream show which is being celebrated and telecasted by re...
^^
Line 4, column 476, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed by renown CNN presenter Anni Hathawai , absolutely take part with my family mem...
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Line 4, column 541, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ith my family members. On the other hand , some of official task left since long d...
^^
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... without any aid of physical instruments that can not afford before the month you...
^^
Line 6, column 19, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...th you have visited. Do you know those who are give me a valuable emergency treatment ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, still, while, in addition, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82592592593 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62432107628 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 127.690721649 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67037037037 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1898771851 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4375 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248950818619 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742575903284 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495675312827 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137924370174 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479741840194 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.