You are interested in attending a short course at a college in an English speaking country. Write a letter to the college administration; include what course you would like to attend. Give details about your educational background and work experience. What reasons make you choose this college?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I would like to apply for a short course on “Disaster risk reduction with special emphasis on floods and forest fires” commencing from 20th of May to 31st of May in your college.
I am former alumni of 2018 year and I have successfully completed postgraduate course in Remote Sensing and GIS. To be honest, it was unforgivable experience attending the course and I have learned almost everything about latest technologies in the field of processing of satellite images. As well as this, all our teachers were approachable and qualified.
After my graduation of the course, I have changed my position and now I am working in an emergency department. By the nature of my work, I need to analyze flood risk in Almaty city and calculate the potential damage in the worst-case scenario. Thus, the main reason why I have decided to apply the short-course mentioned above is that my current field of works demands specific knowledge about how to reduce potential disaster risk. In addition, as a former student I am sure that I will receive priceless information and answers for my questions about floods and how to deal with them from cartography perspective.
Could you please send me the brochure of the course conducted in May and notify if there are any specific requirements for attending it?
Yours Sincerely,
Mariya Vlassova
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| 2019-03-19 | Mariamirabella | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: about the latest
...se and I have learned almost everything about latest technologies in the field of processing...
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...achers were approachable and qualified. After my graduation of the course, I hav...
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...with them from cartography perspective. Could you please send me the brochure of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...t? Yours Sincerely, Mariya Vlassova
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98723404255 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95778660225 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629787234043 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6550083113 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.2 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184783646876 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651995793179 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487727349308 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115033935521 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311278632917 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.