In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this and how can it be solved?
In many nations, citizens have health related issues due to unhealthy lifestyle. Factors playing major role in the situation is popularity of the fast food services and social isolation. Some measures can be taken in order to address the issues.
The main reason of choosing unhealthy habits is that nowadays fast food restaurants are ubiquitous; this kind of food is tasty and convenient. However, junk food is high in salt, sugar and saturated fats. Overconsumption of it leads to medical problems such as overweight, obesity, heart attacks and diabetes. Even realizing the consequences people continue to eat it because modern society has become more isolated and individuals try to fight with frustration by consumption different kinds of fast food such as pizza, doughnuts, sushi, noodles, etc.
Thus, one of the ways to tackle the issue is the promotion of healthy lifestyle, as it is known that physical exercises are good antidepressants. If a person starts to train few times a week, then he or she will feel more happiness and as a result will make healthy food choices. As well as this, authorities have to invest money into social fitness clubs, where membership will be affordable for the poorest part of a community. It would help such persons as pensioners to take care of their health as well as communicate with each other and be engaged into social life.
In conclusion, I think that the poor choices leading to medical problems can be changed by promoting good habits and providing opportunities of implementing them in real life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, thus, well, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07392996109 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87813623474 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642023346304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2636754843 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178736208591 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576966369139 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519585587608 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101339567592 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218688770114 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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