Hi Noma,
It has been a long time since we met last time, hope you and your family all are well and in perfect conditions. In the meantime, how is your father? Is he still feeling from the pains in his head and back?. I know someone who has the same pains and he informed me that the yoga exercises is very helpful where the pains have been reduced after one week from the first meeting. So, let you father try these kind of exercises and I hope he will be fine directly.
Really, I am sending this letter to ask if you can join me to attend the cooking class that will be held next Tuesday at Amwaj Center in the training area room number 0015 around 3PM. The chef who will give this class is the best chef in our country Mr. Julyan Demitree, I think you know him very well. Since, you informed me in the last telephone conversation that one of your dreams is to meet Mr. Demitree and learn some of his new cooking skills. However, there will be a free dinner for who will attend this class and by the way you can try some of his techniques during the class. Moreover, and after this seminar we can visit our friend Julee since she is working in the same center.
I highly appreciate if you can go with me for this occasion in order to learn some new things and take his signature. looking forward to hear from you soon my lovely friend Noma.
Your faithfully
Nomani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...e first meeting. So, let you father try these kind of exercises and I hope he will be fine...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...some new things and take his signature. looking forward to hear from you soon my lovely...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...and take his signature. looking forward to hear from you soon my lovely friend Noma. ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, still, well, i think, kind of, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25475285171 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05612386116 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8879362457 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0769230769 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287620440479 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100674045628 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516385244261 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174767069848 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604939243732 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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