Dear Sir,
My name is Jwan Noman and my ID number is 1212125, I visited your office yesterday afternoon and I rent small car (TOYOTA YARIS) Model 2009. Unfortunately, I am writing this letter to inform you that I did an accident this morning exactly at 10 AM besides Lulu Mall and the car is totally crashed from the back side. So, I parked it next to that place in a permitted place in order to inform you about this and ask you what I shall do.
Really, this is the first time to make an accident like this. when I passed my green signal, somebody has a large car I think it is a Toyota Land Cruiser with white colour from the other side passed his red signal and hit me from the back. Fortunately, both of us are okay and there are no injuries, only my car was destroyed.
Immediately, I have called the police in order to save my right since the mistake from the other person who passed his signal. Therefore, they came and took all required info and pictures and gave me small slip in order to solve my car.
Looking to hear from as early as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Jwan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...rst time to make an accident like this. when I passed my green signal, somebody has ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as early as possible. Yours faithfully, Jwan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, look, really, so, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31067961165 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27758382211 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640776699029 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4421450773 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176485485694 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604973835698 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577517346848 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093186252595 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677072510861 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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