You are invited to the old classmate’s party organized by an old friend. Write a letter to this friend, in your letter:
-explain why you would like to join
-tell him/her something about your life
-as some information about other friends who will possibly participate in
Dear John,
I’ve just writing to let you know that I received your invitation for classmate’s party. Thank you for inviting me and hope you are doing well. I am excited to come and meet old friends there since I have not met any of them a long time.
Do you remember Daniel? The guy who tall and has bright smile. As you know, we had crushed at that time. We have kept in touch after graduated and felt in love until last year, we decided to get married. We could not invite any of my old classmate. It was just after the quarantine time because of Covid-19, that we could invite some close relatives and families.
I really hope all classmates will come for the party this time thus it’s in a weekday evening. I met Lucy one time at a coffee shop few months ago. She told me something and one that makes me curious is about your love with Carla. I also want to meet Mercy, have a condolence with her family about her father’s death.
I thank you again for this wonderful invitation and looking forward to spending a pleasant evening at your place.
Best wishes,
Julie .
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- You are invited to the old classmate s party organized by an old friend Write a letter to this friend in your letter explain why you would like to join tell him her something about your life as some information about other friends who will possibly partic 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so want to meet Mercy, have a condolence with her family about her father’s death...
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Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng at your place. Best wishes, Julie .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so, thus, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44776119403 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27744295152 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651741293532 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.930062463 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236212056232 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703388111296 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463007715659 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140741225045 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526489104599 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.